7:27 AM
Mr. B-G
Traveling in the car
With my family inside
On the new parking lot paved with tar
Near the hotel, our car’s tire is blown on the side
We settle into the room
Find out my pants got a rip
Then we wake up to get some food
Going to the restaurant is already another trip
On the beach, hot and sunny
Boogie board on the water, still cold
I forget my money
And then we go into the town where the sovereigns are sold
Back in the car; my brothers making a lecture
AT LEAST I GOT A GOOD FAMILY PICTURE
3 comments:
The theme of this poem is that even though a bunch of bad stuff happens, they familty can still come away with happy memeries. I Like the ryhmes in this poem.This rythem of the poem is sort of staggery.
great job nate. I like your theme how no matter what happens, you've enjoyed your self. Taht's how it brought me into it. Nice word chocie as well, you're usually good with it, as always. You've realyl spoke to your audience and told them to never worry no matter what happens during a vacation
great job nate. I like your theme how no matter what happens, you've enjoyed your self. Taht's how it brought me into it. Nice word chocie as well, you're usually good with it, as always. You've realyl spoke to your audience and told them to never worry no matter what happens during a vacation
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