The sun shines on the white sand below
The smell of the ocean soothing
I slowly walk and then think
This is the life for me
Gently, the waves crash
I sit on the
Warm white sand
Relaxed
calm
Friday, May 2, 2008
Florida by Ryan L.
7:26 AM
Mr. B-G
7:26 AM
Mr. B-G
About Me
- Mr. B-G
- “Man lowers his head and lunges into civilization, forgetting the days of his infancy when he sought truth in a snowflake or a stick. Man forgets the wisdom of the child.” - Jack Kerouac (1922 - 1969)
2 comments:
Awesome poem Ryan,
I really like your detail, even including the smell of the ocean. The description reminds me of the beach I went to(Clear water Beach)
Great Job
heyy ryan
great poem. i really liked it. I think the mood of the poem is calming and relaxing. The underlining meaning is to relax and do what makes you happy in life. You shouldn't always be stressed out. I really liked it and it really expressed how much you like the beach and relaxing. overall great poem!!!
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