7:16 AM
Mr. B-G
Ocean’s waves crash on shore everyday
Everyone goes to the ocean
Brown sand sparkles in the sun
Tiny seashells hiding
Seaweed floating by
Don’t want to leave
The water
Can be
Blue
6 comments:
JOHN, nice job. I liked your nonet. I also wrote mine about the beach. the theme is relaxing, or vacation overall awesome.
Awesome job son!!!
We are water people for sure! LOL
I like the way you describe the ocean and the fact that you make it sound so VERY relaxing! Hang in there! 2 more months until we see the ultimate beaches!!!
Keep up the good work! :) MOM
John,
What a wonderful description. I'm fortunate that I have many beaches close to me. It's one of my favorite places to go every summer to enjoy the sand, the ocean, and waves. Nice job!
John
You always seem to come up with more
and more. You amaze me..
always thinking...
Great job..
Meme'
Very nice John!! I just got home from a long trip and needed to hear something relaxing, it was perfect for me...:) Keep up the good work~
Wow John!! You amaze me with your descriptive style. Makes me feel like I'm right there on the beach seeing it all unfold. I can even smell the salted air!
Keep up the awesome work! Can't wait to see what is next!
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