Friday, October 12, 2007

Grandparents and Archos by Nate J.

Does value even exist, or is it just an estimation of what we think an object is worth? Sometimes, valuable things can be something like a lucky penny, or a smooth, nice looking rock that can be the cheapest and smallest thing in the world, but the person that owns it, it can be the most important thing in there life. Some people might not think that, and not even care, but that person that does not care probably has something just like that, that they think is valuable. People have different kinds of values.

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There are so many things I can do with my Archos 404. The first thing you can do with this is you can listen to music. The way this is programmed is of how organized it is. It can organize every song by the song name, the genre name, the band name, and even the year it was created. This is important to me because it can hold everything on my computer, and is also a backup drive for my computer and school work. It can also hold and show pictures. You can create slideshows on it and have thousands and thousands of photos. I always download my pictures onto it so I can always look at it and show people. The screen is bright, and has a 3.5 inch color HD screen. Each pixel can eject 16 million colors. This leads to what it can record.

You can buy a DVR for it which records all of the shows you want it to record. This means that you can also take the PMP (Personal Media Player) anywhere you want to go. The Archos also has a microphone that can record as long as you would want it. Also, it has an external speaker so you can listen to music, or watch shows without headphones, so you don’t have to scream for forgetting your headphones. This is how you can entertain yourself with two younger brothers in the same car. This entertains everybody. I especially loved it when I was on the plane ride, and it always soothed my ears if there was a baby screaming in the back ground.

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Since my grandparents live in Poland, I don’t get to see them that often. When I get to see them, we see them in between a week to one month. No matter what time, no matter what day or kind of weather it is, I am always happy to see them. The bad thing about it is when I leave, I feel terrible. We usually stay at my grandparent’s house for about one week to one month. The last time I went to my grandparent’s house was from May to June. I wish I could go to my grandparent’s house any time I wanted, because I love it there. It doesn’t have that much technology, as much as we Americans would have, but the atmosphere, the smell is always so intoxicating there.

We always do fires when we go there. We started a fire at least 3 times there, and every single time was fun. I wouldn’t want to do any thing else during summer but to spend time with my family. Joy overcomes me when I go there, and every single time, it would have the same reaction.

Both financially and priceless value of my Archos, and how priceless grandparents really bring joy to my life, even thought the joy of my grandparents can never end, while the Archos, if that dies, I can always buy a new one or get it replaced with a warrantee. Warrantees on grandparents don’t even exist, and you can never be able to replace them. It is a sad, but true idea. The Archos give me happiness and keeps me entertained while I am going or staying somewhere, while spending time with family is a one time shot. You only have one life to spend with your family, and it should count.

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In the end, you should not estimate ones value, as it could be the most precious thing in the world to that person, and you should respect that. These are my precious things, even though my PMP player is valuable to many people including myself, it has a lot of sentimental value to it too. My grandparents are something I would always cherish, and wish I always had. Well, some things are more valuable to others, but really, what is the value of anything?

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

In Nates essay I thought he did a pretty good job. He did a very nice job describing his Archo, and the numberous functions it has. It reminded me of my Ipod video, which can do pretty much the same thing that his Archo does. When he was desrcibing going to his grandparents it reminded of me when I was younger and my grandparents were alive I would love to go over and hang out with them. One thing I was confused about was when he said the smell there was intoxicating, meaning it smells bad, but I think he meant that it smells very good. I can relate to his essay well though, because I hacve an mp3 and, I used to love going to my grandparents house. One thing I thought he didnt do as well, was he carried on his opening statement and I think it was a run on. I can understand also why he likes going there because they live far away and he must like seeing them. Nate you did a pretty swell job on this value essay piece.

Anonymous said...

Nice long essay. I like the opening paragraph.. I makes you think about what value really is.
But then the next 1/2 of it seems like tech specs for your mp3 player. yes it can do a lot, but give examples and reasons for how and why you value it. English, spelling, and grammar seem to be good, but try mixing up your sentences a little. Use different and more interesting ways of phrasing and wording things with more vivid verbs and adjectives etc. Some words are used to often or could be replaced by better ones. The repetitive sentence style gets boring.
Like the archos paragraph, the grandparents part has lots of Nice examples and facts and descriptions. As well as some , unfortunately, short sweet and to the point opinions and feelings. Cut down on the factual stuff and get more into why and how and what you think of that.
The conclusion wrapped up the opening paragraph well. But it could be longer and more in depth about value, your value, and what value it and how we define it. All in all, a grate job!

Anonymous said...

Nice work, Nate. I really like how you described the items you hold closest to you. I can see you really value your grandparents and your Archos. It seemed like you did more "telling" than "showing", but i still got a great general idea of how close your items are. I liked how you described your Archos and all it's features, it seems like quite a piece of technology you have, and i saw why you like it so much.

Your Archos is definitely your strong point on the essay, you clearly showed all the features on it and it expressed how much you like it. Also, your introduction and conclusion was very clear and it made me want to read more, great job. What i suggest is when you were describing your Archos, try telling us experiences you liked most about it. Same thing with your grandparents, because i did see you did a lot of telling and not showing, overall it was a really good essay, i enjoyed it.

Anonymous said...

Nate -
Good job. I liked reading this essay a lot. I especially liked reading about when you visited Poland, because I have never left the United States and it sounds interesting to go to another part of the world, especially Europe. I thought you did a good job describing your Archos. You used good adjectives, such as "intoxicating". I assume you meant that it smelled good. Very good job.

Anonymous said...

Hello Nate!

I think your essay is very good! It has wonderful phrasing and specifics. Your paragraph about your Archo is extremly describtive! I can tell that you enjoy having one. I loved your paragraphs about your grandparents. I think its cool that they live in Poland, although it is sad that you can only see them for a little while. I can also tell that you enjoy your grandparents company, I can totally relate.


I loved the phrase that you used in your sixth paragraph, "Warrentees on grandparents don't exist, and you can never be able to replace them." ( Paragraph 6) This is such a good line that you used! In conclusion, your essay was extremely well written and detailed! It made me think that its important to value family and never put price items ahead of them. You did a wonderful job Nate!

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