Monday, March 24, 2008

By Jessica M.

Everyday, we as people, struggle with life’s challenges, the obstacles that barricade us for our goals. We force ourselves to overcome these walls, and at the end try as hard as we can to achieve our final aspiration. In the novella, The Old Man and the Sea, by Ernest Hemingway, Santiago faces many obstacles on his quest to catch a marlin. Through his three gruesome days at sea, he suffers through physical and mental exhaustion, treacherous hungry sharks, and the pure struggle of being alone. Such obstacles postponed his success with the marlin, creating a book full of suspense, and a well-rounded, realistic character.

One of Santiago’s most defeating obstacles was his struggle with fatigue. He has the knowledge of at least twenty fishermen combined, and the experience from his life at sea. Nothing would seem to be able to stop this strong old man, until he hooks an enormous 1500 pound marlin. Santiago starts to breakdown, one by one. Each day making it harder and harder for him to open his eyes to realize the fish was still pulling strong on the line. “He took all his pain and what was left of his strength and his long gone pride and he put it against the fish’s agony” (93). In this quote, Ernest Hemingway really expresses Santiago’s physical and mental exhaustion. When it states, “He took all his pain and what was left of his strength”, it explains how tired and the extreme discomfort he experienced while at sea. His tired mind and injured body make each day harder and harder for the old man to stay alive. When it says, “his long gone pride”, I think this shows that he is ashamed of how his body has started to fail him. From the fish’s overall strength,

Santiago had to endure, and overcame exhaustion. Another one of Santiago’s struggles is with a group of hungry gruesome sharks. When he finally ropes in the giant marlin after three days of hell, he thought the hard part was over, he soon realizes the worst is yet to come. “The old man could see pieces of the meat of the fish spilling white from the corners of his jaws as he bumped the fish and closed his jaws.” (113) In this quote it shows Santiago’s desperation on trying to save what is left of the half eaten marlin. Over the course of a day, sharks mutilate the enormous fish. Taking chunk by chunk of the precious meat. Santiago tries everything in his power to stop the sharks, but in the end he ends up with only a skeleton and the memories of a horrific journey at sea.

he most significant and difficult obstacle I believe Santiago went through was being alone at sea. He is in his mid eighties and has gone through a life time job as a fisherman. On his journey he realizes how his age will affect him. It makes me think what if he had had another person join him. Would he have successfully caught the marlin? “‘I wish I had the boy. To help me and to see this.’ No one should be alone in their old age, he thought.” (48) This quote definitely explains how much Santiago needs someone by his side, helping him to catch the fish. Like in the quote, Santiago is way too old to be out alone in the middle of the Gulf of Mexico. Santiago is becoming desperate for a helping hand. He is exhausted, and can’t manage to wrangle in this marlin by himself. I believe if he had a partner to assist him in this fishing trip, he would have made it back with the marlin, fully intact.

Through the novella, The Old Man and the Sea, Ernest Hemingway puts many obstacles in Santiago’s path. Some that make him stronger and others that make him frail and weak. These challenges make the book worth reading. Letting the reader sail through the obstacles with Santiago, experiencing them at the same time. In the course of three tiresome days, Santiago goes through many mental and physical challenges. Leading him to a catch of a life time that he will never forget.

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

jessss,
hey i loved the story! right away i could tell what your thesis was. "Through his three gruesome days at sea, he suffers through physical and mental exhaustion, treacherous hungry sharks, and the pure struggle of being alone." i think it was very clear and made me want to keep on reading.
my favorite quote is the one in the 3rd paragraph. it clearly shows what you were saying throughout the essay.
something i liked best was your intro paragraph. it really made me want to keep on reading, and i could tell it took you a while to find just the right words.
some advice i would give you is to just re-read what you wrote. in some parts the wording was a little off. other than that i LOVED the essay.

Anonymous said...

Hey Jess,
Yuor essay was great. your thesis was clear and well stated. "Everyday, we as people, struggle with life’s challenges, the obstacles that barricade us for our goals." oh ya and great sentence by the way.all your quotes fit well into the story and everytihn just worked well. Yuo sentecne were strong and you had lots of detail. Great Job!!!!

Anonymous said...

Jess
you did such a amazing job on your essay. i think that the first paragraph made it so good. I loved your thesis statement and i think that it was what made the story so long. The whole first paragraph really just made me want to keep reading. You also had a lot of good quotes and great detail. you di such a good job next time just reread what you are reading.

Anonymous said...

Jesss, your essay was great as usual. you should totally become a writter someday. anyway your thesis was soo clear and i loved how you worded it. "Through his three gruesome days at sea, he suffers through physical and mental exhaustion, treacherous hungry sharks, and the pure struggle of being alone." i could automatically tell what the story was going to be about. my favorite quote was probably all of them because i think you transitioned them very well into what you were saying throughout the paragraphs. one thing i would advise you to do would be to reread your essay for any mistakes you might have made. otherwise amazing job!

Anonymous said...

Jess, I really liked your story. I could tell what your thesis statement was right away. Your quotes fit very well with your writing. I didn't have one particular quote I liked because I thought they were all really strong. I believe that your introduction paragraph was the strongest. This is because I made me want to continue reading your story and kept me interested. One thing I think you did very well was the amount of good vocabulary you used. It made your story easier to read. I don't think you need to change anything about your story, I liked it the way it was.

Anonymous said...

Jess i loved reading your story. I think that the first paragraph was the best part of your story. it had so much detail and it also just really pulled the reader in and showed them what you were going to be wrting about. I think that the first paragraph was so strong because of the great thesis that you put into it. i think that you did an amazing job just nexttime reread you story.

Anonymous said...

Jess,
After I read the first paragraph, I knew that your essay was going to be fantastic, and it was. Your opening hook, “Everyday, we as people, struggle with life’s challenges, the obstacles that barricade us for our goals,” was very well written and intriguing. I also enjoyed reading the rest of your first paragraph. I think that the quotes from the second paragraphs were integrated the best because you used more than one. Every opinion you had was backed up by a quote from the book, which was really great. I think that the strongest point of your essay was the details you incorporated into your writing. One thing to maybe try for next time is just re-read what you wrote because some of the sentences didn’t flow as well as they could have. But overall, you did an awesome job and I really enjoyed reading your essay! :)

Anonymous said...

jess,
i loved your essay! i thought it was so good. your thesis was really clear and strong. "In the novella, The Old Man and the Sea, by Ernest Hemingway, Santiago faces many obstacles on his quest to catch a marlin."
my favorite quote was “He took all his pain and what was left of his strength and his long gone pride and he put it against the fish’s agony” (93). i thought it was a really good quote and you worked it in really well in your paragraph.
i think you did really well with picking your quotes for your essay.
some adcive might be to just use better word choice. great job!!