Monday, March 24, 2008

By Matt C.

The Old Man and the Sea is a great novel and like all good books the main character faces obstacles that he has to overcome. That trend is not changed as Santiago faces many obstacles on his way to catching the giant marlin. It is amazing that he has the strength to continue through every challenge that the great ocean throws at him. These obstacles do not only challenge him physically but also mentally.

While fighting the monster marlin Santiago has to continue although he is 84 years old. This makes him extremely tired. It takes Santiago four days to catch the fish and get back home. This is an enormous obstacle because any regular man his age would collapse of exhaustion after putting out that much effort for that long. "I'll try it again, the old man promised, although his hands were mushy now and he could only see well in flashes." Santiago overcomes this obstacle with his determination and great strength. A regular person of any age would have given up after less than a day of struggle but Santiago fought a legendary fish for three whole days. Most people of his age can hardly do any daily activity but is out and using all his effort for a straight 72 hours.

Another one of Santiago's obstacles is the creatures of the ocean. The strength of the marlin is enormous and it takes all of the old mans effort to catch him. Even worse than the marlin are the sharks that attack the dead body of the marlin. They are an obstacle because they prevent him from reaching home with the whole fish. They also test Santiago's mental toughness because once the fish that he worked so hard to get is gone there isn't a lot of motivation to go home. When Santiago went home it proved that he wanted to catch the fish just to beat him and it wasn't about the money that he would have gotten from catching him. He also knew that it was about not giving up no matter what the obstacle was. "What will you do now if they come in the night? What can you do?' Fight them,' he said. 'I'll fight them till I die." Santiago worked hard and got through this tough obstacle. He didn't make it home with the fish but he had not given up and had fought them as hard as he could.

Santiago's other great obstacle is the fact that he is extremely poor and has very simple fishing supplies. He has strings attached to sticks for his fishing poles and because of that he is forced to pull the line in while the great fish uses all of his might to swim away. Pulling on the very skinny line against the fish causes his hands to become much less powerful because they have deep gashes running through them. Also because of his inadequate supplies he is forced to fend off the sharks with his knife tied to his oar. " But there was nothing to be done now. ‘Yes there is,’ he said aloud. ‘I can lash my knife to the butt of one of the oars.’" Had he been able to buy a gaff or other simple hook he would have had a better chance of fending off the sharks and saving his fish.

Throughout the book there are many obstacles that Santiago must fight through and he always makes it although giving up would be much easier. He strives to defeat all obstacles that he is faced with on a day to day basis. Santiago is able to break through and continue because of his great determination and persistence. Santiago is a strong man in both his body and his mind.

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

I "That trend is not changed as Santiago faces many obstacles on his way to catching the giant marlin." Is the thesis statement. It is clear but it does take up 2 sentenses. It is engaging when combined with the rest of the topic paragraph.

II I think "I'll try it again, the old man promised, although his hands were mushy now and he could only see well in flashes." is the strongest quote because it is vivid and is a good example of the old man's perserverence.

IIIOne thing the essay does well is the integration of quotes like "What will you do now if they come in the night? What can you do?' Fight them,' he said. 'I'll fight them till I die." because they support their paragraphs well.

IV One thing i would recomend is to elaborate more on the old mans motivations.

Good Job!!

Anonymous said...

mattt
your essay was pretty good:) your thesis was okay, but it was kind of hidden, next time try to make it more clear. your best quote was probably the third one. it shows his determination to get past the obsticals he faced.
one thing that really stood out to me while reading your essay was your ending sentence. i thought this was really strong and summed up the essay well.

Anonymous said...

matt,
your thesis was engaging, and well written. it clearly shows the main point of your essay.
The third quote was the best because it demonstrated the determination he needed to overcome his obstacles. Although you probably should have included the page numbers in your quotes.
however, i have to agree with dan in saying that your intergreation of quotes was your strongest point.
other than the page numbers on the quotes i have no suggestions. nice essay overall.

Anonymous said...

Matt, your thesis was a really good choice. It explains the essay very well. Only thing is that it takes up two sentences to get the entire idea. It goes really well with your intro paragraph. "I'll try it again, the old man promised, although his hands were mushy now and he could only see well in flashes." is the best quote. It gives a clear example of his perseverance. you used excellent vocabulary, and nothing needed be changed.

Anonymous said...

matt!!!!
LOVED the essay i thought it was fantastic! your thesis statement was very clear and strong "That trend is not changed as Santiago faces many obstacles on his way to catching the giant marlin." I think you really get the reader's attention and makes the reader want to keep reading on. your best quote would be the third one it was very strong, it really shows the determination that the old man had to have to overcome the obstacles thrown at him. you made a few mistakes here and there but overall i thought your essay was great and really enjoyed reading it!

Anonymous said...

Matt-
Great job on your essay. Your thesis statement was a little harder to find then others, however it was also two sentences rather than one. Your first quote was the strongest and I thought so because you integrated it so well into the essay. You do not have paragraphs, so I can't really say which one is the best. Your conclusion was good but a little rushed. All in all good job!

Anonymous said...

hey man. your essay was pretty well-written. the thesis... okay. i expected better from you. your strongest supporting paragraph, i would say, was your third one. compared toyour others, it had a well-integrated quote and connected with your thesis better. the thing you did best was your ending paragraph. it really wrapped things up good. my only suggestion is to rewirte your thesis. other wise, great job.

Anonymous said...

Matt, I think your essay was really good. Your thesis statement was very clear and easy to understand. The detail and vocabulary in your story was great and I don’t think you could have improved on those two things. You best body paragraph was your first because there was a lot of description and your fit in really well. “ I'll try it again, the old man promised, although his hands were mushy now and he could only see well in flashes," is the best quote in your story. I didn’t really see any grammar mistakes so I think you essay was really good and I enjoyed reading it.

Anonymous said...

Matt,
Your essay was very well written. Your thesis statement was very clear. I think if you had combinded the two sentences, it would have made it a little better. I think in the third paragraph, your quote was the strongest. It really showed Santiago's determination. I thought all your quotes flowed nicely in your paragraphs. I enjoyed reading your essay. Good job, and keep up the good work!

Anonymous said...

matt,
your thesis was engaging, and well written. it clearly shows the main point of your essay.The third quote was the best because it demonstrated the determination he needed to overcome his obstacles. Although you probably should have included the page numbers in your quotes.however, i have to agree with dan in saying that your intergreation of quotes was your strongest point.niceee job!!!