Alaina Patrice always dances
But it really looks like she prances
She has no skill for school
But I still think she’s cool
So A. Pat turns everyone’s glances
Thursday, April 12, 2007
Alaina Patrice by Julee B.
7:20 AM
Mr. B-G
7:20 AM
Mr. B-G
About Me
- Mr. B-G
- “Man lowers his head and lunges into civilization, forgetting the days of his infancy when he sought truth in a snowflake or a stick. Man forgets the wisdom of the child.” - Jack Kerouac (1922 - 1969)
5 comments:
i enjoyed reading this poem very much. i laughed when you were talking about alaina prancing. think about it and try not to laugh. do it. this poem effectively made me laugh out loud. After reading it, I feel like julee is an outstanding poet. I am very warm and happy? Ive never read anything like this before.
hey juleeeeeee! your poem is quite wonderful. after i read it i can imagine alaina dacingg and prancing. in this poem you described alaina perfectly. i feel joyous after reading your poem. umm it really doesn't remind me of any other poem i have read but that's why i like it so muchhhh.<3
WOWW this girl seems pretty rad :D
Justt kidding. I did, however like this rhythem of this poem, you rhymed really well. Reading it made me feel happy. It made me think of myself. I also liked how you abriviated alaina hanc with A Pat. The words you used were original and cool, "prances" is a fun word.Swelll Job,Hun!!
julee, this describes alaina perfectly. i love it i can just picture her being up on stage dancing becuase its her passion. you ave a very good rhyme scheme. veryyyy good poem julee!
juleee i loved this. you explained alaina wonderfully. I can just picture alaina doing all of those things. You had good ryhming and you made the poem interesting to read by making it funny. I loved it wonderful jobb!
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