Was too cautious for you
To scared to be hurt
Didn’t believe it was true
You were such a flirt
Said you wanted to move slow
So I gave you a chance
And my feelings began to grow
So we began the dance
Thought I was falling in love
But I realized I was wrong
You weren’t deserving of
Me, all along
Glad I saved my love for someone
Who won’t leave things undone
Thursday, April 12, 2007
Undone by Olivia L.
7:23 AM
Mr. B-G
2 comments:
Olivia , this poem was really good.I noticed the ryhming over other line which makes this poem a sonnet. Your poem kind of makes me sad becasue it sounds like your talking about falling in and out of love but it was only really lust. It kind of sounds like you were in this situation becasue it sounds like a deep poem. This poem was very good and i loved it.
LIVVVERRR,
your poem was very deep and emotionalll. there seems to be a possible story behind it. but thats what i like about it...it just seems so real. after reading this poem i feel kind of saddddd and upset for the person who was left in the dirtt. this poem is really unique and not like anything else you have read just because i feel like you wrote what you actually felt. you knoww. <3
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