As the sun shines bright
I feel its warmth.
I feel it against my back.
I look up.
What a blue sky.
Has it always been so blue?
No harm is present.
It feels as perfect,
As it ever once was.
This is why.
No one’s around.
Without proof,
Is it still there?
Thursday, April 12, 2007
A Taste of Perfection by Emily M.
7:16 AM
Mr. B-G
3 comments:
Wow, emily. i see the pictures in my mind of the blue sky,all up high. nice job getting through to your reader. i really like this poem and hope that you keep writing because youhave a lot of skill with a pen and paper. Nice job.
emily, i really really love this poem!
after i read it, i was thinking about a warm summer day, just lounging in the sunshine and enjoying life. it made me feel wicked happy and just content. it doesn't really remind me of any other poem i've read because it was seriously so good. but then at the same time it does because the subject is common in some nature poems. the one thing it reminds me of is that joke where if no one was around and a tree fell would someone hear it. i'm not sure how it goes but... yeah. awesome jobbb! :]
hii babyyyyy. i reallllly likes this poem. It reminded me of summertimeeee! It felt real because in the summertime when your aloneee and sitting outsidee it feels like everything is perfect and this just captured that. It was like it takes all your worries away.
i love this and i loveee youuuuuuuuuu
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