Thursday, April 12, 2007

Call Me the Boss by Mike C.

Call me the king without a crown
I wash it down.
Bottle it up
And fill my cup

Call me lost man without a map
No time to nap.
I must prevail
For I set sail.

Call me the man without a brain.
What I’ve gained,
Is what I’ve lost.
Call me the boss.

1 comments:

Anonymous said...

Cheico, I really liked the idea of this poem. I don't think anyone else covered the political outspeech aspect in their poems, and its good to get some diversity up here.

If flowed very well, the rhymes were good, and I didn't stumble in many places. I bet your other poems are just as good. Well done.